Zion’s Ole Soccer Workshop Reflection

Zion’s Ole  Soccer Workshop Reflection

Our workshop’s meaning was just to train for our 

tournament  

I didn’t choose it I had to

I learned new skills like how to dribble the ball close 
and not lose it.

I learned how to pass the ball properly and aim properly


I was good at being brave at doing dangerous

dribbles like a
rainbow and participated to train every day with
Xiah

I enjoyed discovering new dribbling skills

This will help me in the future because I might
change my
dream and want to become a soccer player

ZIon's tm2 wk8's C Q Wev

        

          

             Packing for Sacrifice

                     

We are hiding underground with others,

but to me they are like my brothers

All I see are my brothers in fear,

and some other people hiding in tears

We are all scared we suffered enough,

come on guys I know this is rough

We are sacrificing our lives for our hometown,

and when we get home we will make them proud

I am suffering of hunger photos are all I got,

but all I see are innocent people getting shot

All my loved one are 800 km far,

the only way we navigate is just to follow the stars

                    

Innocent kids crying till there tears run out,

was like me I would know what I would felt

                     The War Zone appears

We are entering our opponent’s territory when we leave we will leave with glory

“I need to take cover to reload”and tell our air force to hack into their code

 All I hope is that we will never surrender but all i can think of is christmas having steak that is so tender

Half  of our enemies are enemies are dead a quarter of the floor isn’t covered with liquidy red

2 deadly months has just past,finally this dangerous war this has finished at last

My Learning Story

I am good at using a good title which will tell them more

I got better at using an interesting hook because i made my reader have a feeling

It’s hard for me to use similes, metaphors because I don't know that much about them

It’s hard for me to Include something unusual because I don't know unusual stuff

I need to work on using different sentence starters because my reader might get bored

Tevin’s feedback: You were good at: rhyming and adding really good detail and giving everyone a picture in their heads about the war.

You don’t got anything to work on because you hooked in the reader.  

Kate’s feedback

This is a great poem Zion. What a really clever choice of text type to share your ideas. You have really made a picture in your readers head. You have chosen powerful words to help your reader visualise.

philosophy LS

Zion’s Philosophy Learning Story 



Wanderers are philosophers

Philosophy involves the beauty of something and what you want
to know more about and going to see stuff that is interesting.
It is when someone is thinking about stuff and wonders/questions
and wants to know more
People are asking why things are happening eg Why are we on
earth?
What is the difference between an old person than a young
person? 

Beauty is a beauty just what you see 
If someone judges me I won't judge them  It’s their opinion of
the look of me

Success Criteria: 
Listen to each other
Respect each other
Build on each others’ ideas
Talk to each other not the teacher

I am good at building on other ideas because I
want to know more about the subject

I need to work on talking to others and not the
teacher because I don’t want the others to copy

Milina’s Feedback

You are good at listening to me because you like to
listen to my ideas
You need to work on respect for each other because you talk a
lot when we are learning.

Fraction's LS

Fractions Learning Story     Term 2   2018

Math is my least favorite subject but until I get it I’m into it

Soulaf and Baraa’s mum is making sweet dumplings and dessert pancakes for their Ramadan feast.
They need ⅔ of a cup of flour for the dumplings and ¾ of a cup of flour for the dessert.
How many cups of flour do they need altogether?

 

 

Luqaimat – لقيمات-                              Atayef – Dessert Pancakes

This problem is about Soulaf and Baraa making Atayef and    - حلويات and they need ⅔ of a cup of flour for the dumplings and ¾ of a cup of flour for dessert

Explain how your group solved the problem

We used tiles to help us, so we did this is     1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/8 1/12 1/4                                                             1 1/12           1/3             ¼           1/4                 1/4                                  1/3                       1/3 =⅔ 1/4 1/4 1/4 ⅔ +¾ =?/12        1 cup & 5/12

I am good at finding different ways to solve ideas because I haven't used tiles before I got better at answering questions  because I can make them understand I find it hard to explaining the problem because I know how to say but not to explain it I need to work on giving more information  because people want to know more The key competency I use well is thinking because I can think on the spot easily The key competency I need to work on is making meaning because when I explain I don't make sense

Zion is good at sharing his Ideas and friendly arguing because of he confident and brave and he takes risks so he isn’t afraid to disagree with someone and also shares some of his great Ideas Zion needs to work on explaining more clearly and more specifically so then people can understand what we were trying to do. Keep up the good work of Zion.